Reviews for I want
Pheobe Meryll chapter 1 . 12/15/2005
I like the concept, but I think you could have uped the emotions more. also,watch the grammar - you need to close quotations with commas.
San Carpenter chapter 1 . 12/15/2005
'S good. I like where you cut it off, and I like the charactarization, which is spelled wrong. Kinda wistful and bitter, I thought.
Nitara chapter 1 . 12/15/2005
Haha, busted! :) Great story.