Reviews for Limitations
One-Hand Clap chapter 1 . 4/20/2008
I loved the message of this poem, first off. The way you delievered it was so casually elegant - it was exquisite. However, I did not think the comma after every line was necessary, and it did somewhat mire the poem down. So if you were to do a next draft, I would remove them completely!

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like a lover chapter 1 . 3/23/2005
wow. wonderful. so short yet so perfect.. it's so going on my favourite's list!