Reviews for People Die |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This was beautifully written, so real, and so moving. We're studying George Orwell's essays in class, and this piece reminded me of his style, the whole 'exposing a truth' and 'convincing the reader through personal experience.' :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() This essay made me sad, but at the same time interested me. I know what it feels like to lose someone special. When I was seven my best friend Conner got hurt while he was on vacation, went into a coma, and died a year after he woke up... without a memory. The only things he remembered was his older sister and my name, but he hardly knew me anymore. After he died I refused to have friends until the fifth grade, when I realized I was a social outcast. But relationships have never been the same to me since, and have always been harder. But again, Great essay. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Typos: tight, low cut shits. Shirts, I suppose? Still, made me laugh lol. ;) out on Malibu pink lipstick. I believe you meant put? I loved this though. Flawless flow of the story, great details, great writing simply. Excellent job. |
![]() ![]() I'm sorry... And you're right. Many people do take their life for granted. It just isn't right. People in your school must be unsympathetic or something if they'd make a joke out of it. How could they? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very, very mature. Very work. -Anatha |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is so good. I don't have words for it. Keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() extremely well written...and extremely sad ( Death is very hard to deal with..three of my good friend's parents died. One was of Lukemia, one was in a fire, and the other was of breast cancer. This was so sad I cried ( Never forget the ones that died. ~*Toni*~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is so well written. I feel bad for every one in this but especially you. Sometimes we may never know why one killed themselves. My sister has a friend who's father committed suicide right in front of my sister and her friends. It was really traumatic for every one.I hope that writing this was some sort of a helpful release. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this. It hit what I would normally call 'too close to home'. But this was different... Seventh grade... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked this, not only because of the message of never wanting to forget, or be forgotten, but also because I sensed it came from your heart. I don't think there's anything better than that. nice job |
![]() ![]() ![]() i cant really relate to this, but in a weird way i am-ish...this made me cry,it must of been hard to write about it... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know what that feels like, or something really close to it anyway. 2 of my friends have tried to commit suicide multible times, and I dread if the day comes where one of them actually succeeds. Like you, I keep in mind who not to forget. I hope life gets better for you. Sincerely,~ TLC |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was really well written. it made me cry. it reminds me of when in grade four my uncle commited suicide... keep up the good work. *hugs*. good luck. with respect,reka |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was really interesting and sad. The closest I have come to a real type of death was during my eigth grade year. There was this know-it-all boy, who always was so obnoxious to the rest of us... we didn't understand why at all. He was having family problems, his parents involved in a bitter and violent divorce and custody battle; his mother even had a restraining order against his father. One Sunday, the father came to their church where the mom was a pastor, and he shot her in the parking lot (killing her), and then shot proceed to kill himself. I will never forget coming to school the next day. Everyone was a mess, and the boy was never-ever the same. The only thing I am glad to remember is that the kids in our school were so supportive, and noone made it into a joke. Keep those memories alive! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So sorry to hear about this story-My good friend committed suicide 1 year and 4 months ago-so I know what its like to loose someone. It's really personal and really hard to deal with-I am also sorry to hear that no one was there for you when your friend died-the same things happened to me- .com is Alex's website if you would like to check it out. /peace/ |