Holy crap. First I scanned the length of it... not knowing what to think. Then I read the reviews, and, noting their positive notations, I read the story... And, I must say, I am very, very impressed.

Good job. Your style's excellent. I don't think I can say anything bad about it... I don't think it's old at all, just well-written. I'm sure you could write all your stories like that, no matter what time period they take place in. Kudos. Please continue this; I know you havne't updated in a while, but now that I have read it (finally) I do wish to see more... I really hope you haven't given up on it.

Write lots more please! Especially about Will and Mattie together!

Crap! That was the last chapter you posted! Now I really want to know what happens so hurry up...please... but ya I really like your story! It's so good! If you get the chance I'd really apriciate it if you read & Reveiwed mine, I'd value you opinion greatly! Thanks for the great story!

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Okay, you kept me reading your story (That's a first for me) I love it! You describe things really well, another thing that some people don't do! Now that I'm all into your story I HAVE to read the other chapters.

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HEY! I really liked that! I still haven't read your other chapters but at least Im still intriged enough to keep on reading! lol! I'll read and reveiw you other chapters as I read them! Thanks!

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Good! You updated! Except my dumb computer neglected to inform me of that. Gr!

I loved your last sentence: "I looked one last time at my new book before falling asleep, where troubles existed only in dreams" It was such a good way to tie everything up.

And last, but not least: Tres bien! Vous parlez le Francais aussi! Tres bien. :D

Can't wait for the next chapter of this to come...

this is such a great story...i can't wait to see what happens!

another splendid chapter. i really liked this one as wel...it was very good to hear of Mattie's family and how she and her dad are close. could this come into play in the long-run? just a thought...really good story, easy to read and i enjoy it. I hope you update sometime real soon!

Well my dear Gabby, this was simply amazing. The vocabulary perfectly fit the scene! I loved it Gabs, I hope to read more of To Kill A Patriot soon!

great story so far! i am really enjoying this. i am interested to see what Will has to say about the Tories, and how Matti will take it. i really like your characters so far, very believable in that time period. don't pay attention to the first reviewer, they don't know what they are talkin about. ME on the other hand does, and this story is awesome! i love the Revolutionary time era, it is always so fascinating being an American, and i hope you update soon!

I like it so far! I hope to read more of it soon-the Time preiod surrounding the Amrican Revolution are probably most interesting in my mind.

Parlez-vous le Francais? Couldn't resist asking. ;)

I like what you have so far, I think it's definately a promising beginning, so keep up the good work.

I have to disagree with your other reviewer. I think your tone of voice and word choice fits the story quite well. I think you rush it a bit, but other than that, it's a good beginning.

You seem to have tried to write in a style that would not seem too much out of place had it actually been written in the Revolutionary War. If you didn't try than I am truly sorry, but your writing style just sounds... old. Anyway IMO it doesn't work. Using it in the narration just makes it seem like a translated essay. (Get what I mean? I mean that I think the message would be delivered with more force i.e. more effect if it was delivered in straight style. Use the dialogue portion to set the Ye Olde English mood. It seems just awkward everywhere in the story.