Reviews for I Love Myself
Shaman Zel chapter 1 . 3/29/2005
me gusta. es un poco extraño, pero como entero, es brillante. in the third stanza, the last two lines seem far too tree-huggishly overdone. there are some issues with repetition, such as in the 4th stanza, where you use and twice, skip it, then use it again. consistency is all i ask, (give us this day our daily mask) anyways, es mejor que los poemas que tenía que leer para el jornal literario de Oak Hall. me encanta mucho, gracias por escribir bien, me estoy relevado.