Excellent poem! Wonderful job.

I like this acrostic - it follows the form without making it seem forced or awkward.

love it, i can relate...

oh! I absolutely ADORED this... must read it again... you hav amazing talent... ~ ming

ooh, this is very very pretty. it really *does* have great flow and rhythm, the word are well-balanced and quite lovely for conveying the thought of randomness. I love it; quirky yet stylish. A few line breaks seem strategically placed, much like some of my own work. Great vocabulary, lots of "a" words (atypical awkward acts, audacious acting) heh, just occured to me. Good job!

smiles,

-salt.

I didn't expect randomness could be described so well! *applauds you work* One of the few good acrostics left in the world. Good work and (belatedly) thanks for your review!

*claps hands*

escellent!

thanks 4 the review!

Nicely written, form, diction, and style reflect the meaning of the poetry. I like how you state awkward followed by a cacophonous string of words to illustrate the meaning. There's alliteration in your poetry which shows how it goes from cacophony to rhyme, quite random. Then to further impress us you finsih with caesuras, breaking of the phrase, to emphasize how you mean it has no place. Quite a techincal writer there, aren't cha?

really clever, it was great. thanks for the review:D~katie

This piece is true to it's promise of randomness and very cool! Loved your word choices as well...Keep it up! D

Hey, I like your poem, it was great.

very cunning and clever poem! i like how u got the acrostic to work

great job!

The use of alliteration in this piece is absolutely fantastic! I'm impressed! Keep up the great work!Anna.

Nice job with the alliteration. I especially like the last two lines. ~Karma Chameleon

ahh, randomness, gotta' love it. _ ;) i like these lines:"decently deciding at the last… moment

Oblivious to logic, a confusing phase

Makeshift reality; it has no place."

keep up the great writing! -kwazykandypie AKA Kelly Ann-