|Reviews for Blood, Guns, And “Forget Me Nots”|
| poetic abortion chapter 1 . 3/28/2005
You made a spelling mistake or two but it was only one word really. "hour" should be "our". A saddening but lovely poem, the whole thing had a sort of meloncholic feel to it which made it more amazing as I read. My favotite line whould have to be:
" Hearts' don't bleed/They cry..."
I found that really powerful and unique. I love that line so much. Brillance in my opinion. Well done!
!~* Noelle *~!
| JustSome-writter-chick chapter 1 . 3/24/2005
LOVE your story. You really told the story of the shooting in a good way. Your a great poet.
| Saeo chapter 1 . 3/22/2005
Wow...so personal, and for a minute I didn't realize it was in the point of view of the victim...wonderful job, you really nailed the emotion of heartache. I like this line, thogh "I can’t heal my broken family…." that stuck out to me for some reason, very sweet. Nice job!