Reviews for United Segregation
runaway sheet chapter 4 . 8/4/2012
Wow, I'd like to say that you handled the whole story with really mature emotions. The main character's reaction to his situation was so raw and your description so real. I hate when rape scenes are done callously and this one wasn't. Almost cried myself with how frustrated and dead the main character (whose name eludes me now :( ) would have felt. Very well written. All the cops were pretty professional. Not plot-device cops. This whole story has such a clinical feel to it.

Thanks for the story :)
Antonis chapter 5 . 2/15/2012
I like this a lot. please continue with it
mittelan chapter 5 . 8/30/2010
this is really an interesting story :)

I'm hoping to see more
Curb Crasher chapter 5 . 7/23/2008
This is so freaking amazing! Thanks for writing!

. . . Are you okay? Did anything happen in the past three years?
S chapter 5 . 7/20/2006
You're an extremely good writer. Great story.
eldrin chapter 5 . 6/13/2006
This went from a story looking forward to a jolly vacation and lots of fun sex to surprising intenseness. Realistically angsty, without heavy overburdening. An excellent story. I don't suppose that it will ever be updated?
dyers-eve chapter 5 . 4/8/2006
Poor Aaron...was it the guy in the toilet who raped him? Please update soon. x
Esquirella chapter 5 . 7/13/2005
I just read this again. The drama you wrote here is very moving. You can't help but feel for Aaron.
Pure chapter 5 . 7/7/2005
I love this story because it’s so realistically dark and serious. I really feel for Aaron. Cheers!
ddz008 chapter 5 . 7/3/2005
Great chapter!This story is really interesting, I love your writing and I want to know what are you planning to do in later kilos is a lot :S I hope he gets help quickly!Hope to see the next chapter pretty soon!:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D
princess max chapter 5 . 7/3/2005
This story makes me want to grab everyone who's written a crappy rape story and shout THIS IS HOW YOU FUCKING DO IT.

'He didn’t want to tell Jonathan that he was gay and it had always been his fantasy to have his bed partner tie him up' - I give you one thousand million bonus points for this.
shuukaku chapter 4 . 5/26/2005
aww... this is good! keep going! i'm dying to read more! quick!
A Boy Flower chapter 4 . 5/25/2005
I think I missed something, but I'm far too lazy to go back and read over it.

The dude in the bathroom isn't the dude who raped him, correct? I liked the bathroom dude.

NO! I've changed my mind! The bathroom dude is another victim. And we will soon find out the rapist is Aaron's father!

...Yes, I've been drinking too much Pepsi...
A Boy Flower chapter 3 . 5/25/2005
So, I figured, since I'm finally logged in again, and you're on your lunch break, I'd catch up with my reviewing you, since I'm really far behind...

So, as weird as it is for me to say this - I liked this chapter. For what happened. Because I really wasn't expecting it and I thought it was great. I was like "..." after reading it, for a good twenty seconds, let me tell you...

Alright, onto the next chapter!
ddz008 chapter 4 . 5/8/2005
Great chapter!Poor Aaron, must be horrible to be raped... T_TI liked Jon, he seems to be a nice things get better for writing, please!Hope to see the next chapter pretty soon!:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D
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