Reviews for We All Came Tumbling
guardien chapter 1 . 12/6/2006
Its just one of the few things in this world you'd be glad to read aloud. I'm really impressed by the fluidity of the unorthodox words you use in a poem, such as...emo, metaphor.

You are quite possibly one of the most underated and unheard of poets here.
The Rain's Kiss chapter 1 . 6/21/2005
Is it refering to Jack and Jill?

The underlying meaning was pretty easy to understand because you write so beautifully.
clockwork kiss chapter 1 . 3/24/2005
What, you mean Jack and Jill? That's the main thing I got. Anyways, it is -beautifully- done. I absolutely love the third stanza, especially how you emphasize "-that hill-", but at the same time leave it open so that the reader can associate it with whatever was more personal in their own relationships. The flow is very good, too. The only thing I would say was that although I love the Jack and Jill scene, the end was a little predictable. However, I like the idea of the girl being the pusher, because that sets it apart. Anyways... great work!
Aslan Israel chapter 1 . 3/23/2005
Wow. I love your ending... it just hints at something more...
and flowers chapter 1 . 3/22/2005
wow. i aboslutely love this, dear. i cannot think of what to say about it. i just... at a loss of words i suppose. the ending though, i like it A LOT. amazing.
BabyBeeLovesHoneyBear chapter 1 . 3/22/2005
so very great. really enjoyable. i would love to read it over and over.
from beneath the bell jar chapter 1 . 3/22/2005
great ending
Cloud Burst chapter 1 . 3/22/2005
i like the format of this, very original! great job!