|Reviews for Feelings of Ill|
| Steel Winged Angel chapter 1 . 3/23/2005
Totally know how you feel Raishel. Been awhile since you've posted. Hasn't seemed to dilute your poetic talent though ;) Has a nice flow and a clear emotional feel. Only thing I would fix is the rhyming in this stanza:
It's everywhere I goIn everything I do.I try to force it downBut it lies in wait to stew.
Other than that, very nice job! Hope to see more stuff from you soon!~Hawke