|Reviews for Aelyn's story|
| Floppy125 chapter 26 . 1/18/2010
Aw! This story was awsome! You wrote it very well :) there were a lot of difficult scenes to wrote, such as the fighting ones.
I loved the way you kept the mystery with Aelyn :)
anyways... Great job!
| WithEveryReason chapter 26 . 1/12/2010
Made me cry at least three times.
I love happy endings. I hate how people say that happy endings are cliche'. That may be true sometimes, but not always.
Happy endings aren't as rare as we think. I think this story proves that.
| xyz chapter 27 . 1/5/2010
a beautiful and very very creative story,,
though it has many typos,but they can very easily be neglected..
I think you are too humble,,ur story proceeds at just the right pace and that aelyn as the king's daughter twist was spectacular..
very engaging story.
| claireponcherrii chapter 7 . 12/27/2009
i like gareth more than kristram. gareth is more human while kristram only seems... nice. nothing else to him. just nice. gareth kristram.
| 06-Alexandria-03 chapter 26 . 12/22/2009
Wow, okay, your story is amazing. I love how great they matched up! I have to admit, I was afraid that she was going to end up with Kristram... not that I don't love him or whatever, but... well... Aelyn and Gareth are amazing!
I think you did a very good job, and I definitely approve of your story ;)
| leirion chapter 26 . 12/8/2009
I just lovve it...
Not sure wether u're still reading the reviews but couldn't help from posting of such wonderful story you written...
Great story, hail for timpanigirl!
| Country Princess chapter 27 . 11/26/2009
Wow! That was awesome!
| lrstar123 chapter 25 . 10/23/2009
this story is great! i hope you'll make many more like it.
| notmuchbutlife24 chapter 26 . 10/21/2009
i really love this story. not even love it, admire, bow down to, praise, worship this story. it's so amazing! i felt like i was reading the best selling novel or something! this is by far the BEST story i have ever read. ]
Emily (hehe, Emily's my name too)
| Chocorange888 chapter 26 . 10/21/2009
This is such an incredibly emotional piece of writing. I am very impressed. Whereas sometimes I get very skeptical of how quickly the characters seem to change their feelings towards eachother, I was quite satisfied while reading this. Thank you.
| schoeppc chapter 26 . 9/27/2009
That was awesome! I really loved this story!
| Brat Face chapter 2 . 8/19/2009
i like it so far xoxoxo
| Ravina chapter 26 . 8/17/2009
I don't know if you're still checking your reviews on FictionPress, and I almost didn't review because I figured it's been a long time and you wouldn't...but then I felt extremely guilty about it just in case you DID keep track. ESPECIALLY because your story was so great that I fell in love with it almost instantly.
| XxSiennaxX chapter 26 . 6/24/2009
I absolutely loved your story, it was beautiful and I love the ending, although it would have been nice if she didn't have to abdicate her throne.
| Aqua-eagle Sunshine chapter 26 . 6/14/2009
Though it wasn't perfect, i thought you did a really good job.
The progress of the characters was great and my attachment with them grew throughout the story.
I loved Aelyn and Gareth's characters and i liked how Kristram didn't turn out to be a bad guy.
I think one of the stories strongest points was Talen's character, even though we don't ever meet him i felt like he was one of the greatest people in it. He was my favourite character and i felt sad for him in many parts.
The ending was great and the last line was really touching 'Always together. I could almost hear Talen cheering with the rest of the crowd' real nice.
Overall i enjoyed reading it alot :)