|Reviews for Painting Unedited|
| death-caster chapter 1 . 6/18/2005
Jeez, K. And I thought Paris had problems. OK, I still think Paris has problems, but she still rocks anyways. I've glanced at most of your stuff, and I doubt I know about all of it. ? Yin
| Cloud Burst chapter 1 . 4/5/2005
this was beautifulu hav a good choice of words
| Thunder Goddes Kino chapter 1 . 4/3/2005
Hey, that was a really nice poem in spite of the sad tone. The wording and description was beautiful, you have a unique style of writing and the imagery was excellent. _ Awesome job
| Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 3/28/2005
Saddening. You capture your emotions honestly.
| thedarkthatiwas chapter 1 . 3/25/2005
Wow, a beautiful poem... very sad... very good. lovely work, I like!
| Le Machi chapter 1 . 3/23/2005
very well written, I like it a lot. *.:nightdragon:.*
| S0ulSearching chapter 1 . 3/23/2005
'A ruby red stain on her tunicTraced where she'd broken her heart"I love that line...this whole thing is just...awsome. Amazing. -Pammy-
| Thyrt chapter 1 . 3/23/2005
ah that was really good!i like the other one also..kinda hard for me to decide which i like better..cuz they're both so good lol!