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Reviews for
This place is Beautiful
Unholy Haven
chapter 1 .
6/2/2005
Beautiful! Very fresh and original, and so easy to visualize.
Izaguirre
chapter 1 .
5/12/2005
Great use of lines! The poem flows really well even though it can be almost read as phrases linked together to form the larger picture.