|Reviews for deception|
| Sheets chapter 1 . 4/16/2006
Have you ever been anorexic? Because, if not, you portay it excellently.
| White Tea and Ginger chapter 1 . 11/8/2005
Wow. I can relate to this one, too. Especially the entire first stanza. That was just amazing.
Wow. You're a seriously impressive writer.
| lackluster chapter 1 . 7/1/2005
.true! great poem!
| who the fuck else chapter 1 . 4/2/2005
that's so hot... it's like, seximo dude.
loves it. MOOSHWASHWA
| apromptedpoet chapter 1 . 3/28/2005
Good. I think a lot of girls our age know how this feels. Cuz it is a teenage hormone thing.
Overall I think this is really good. Good job.