|Reviews for Found Girl|
| Tessabe chapter 3 . 3/23/2005
I like that you don't have her up and running after a Coma, the way you have written it is more realistic, but these are really too short, perhaps you should put several days in a chapter. And I wonder what else is happening in her world, are there other people that will be brought into the story and how is it that she knows her name? Do they know who she is? I think more background would work well.