I like this . . . it has a strong feel . . . don't know how to put it into words, but it reminds me of somthing Evanescence-like. Really an errie and elegant poem. Great description and vivid imagery . . . really well done. Keep it up

wow! the first ones i read of yours were awesome, then not as good, but now you're back to being brilliant!...not that you weren't before. hmp, can't say what i mean, hopefully you understand. great imagery and describiton. and yeah, the title does fit great.