|Reviews for We All Fall Down|
| Hegi chapter 1 . 3/31/2005
I generally dislike to explain my work, but you may find it helpful if I point out that the reason there's no foreshadow to the suicide is because... the girl doesn't commit suicide. If there's no reason to think she does, then it's quite probable she doesn't, now isn't it?
(But yes, she does die. Welcome to the world of death caused by things other than willful intent.)
| Ann chapter 1 . 3/31/2005
The scenes need to be a little longer and the suicide came too fast and with no foreshadowing ... otherwise ... really interesting idea!
| La Flaca chapter 1 . 3/26/2005
I liked it. It hit hard...sounds very familiar to me. Good job.