That was i nice long poem! Most poems are too short(including mine, so I really shouldn't talk!) That was a very good poem. Very good imigary.

(aka broken truth)

hey sky, long time, no read! i loved that one, we all hide behind masks, ne? (i hate insomnia) i just have one question for you, do you ever take off your damn mask?

oh, and no one really learns to not keep emotions bottled inside. it doesn't matter ho many times they've blown up, stupid people. believe me,i'm the head stupid person.

oh by the by, you said to keep posting, i thought i'd let you know that I'm not posting on broken truth anymore, but know on ever be. i guess this is enough rambling, later, colie

I'm sorry to hear something like that. You've expressed it well. I know my reviews are horrible cause I really can't think of anything better to say. I'm being honest as I can be. This is amazing.~CT

How beautiful! I've read lots and lots of these love poems but none like this one. This is what love is about. Amazing talent, I plan to read the rest of your stuff when I have time. Til then, keep writing.~CT

So very true. I love how the first lines are italicized and in blue, making the poem a bit stronger than usual. Keep it up, it was nice.~CT

Hello, you submitted a review on one of my poems so I thought I would give you the same courtesy. It is very, very honest. We all wear these masks to hide our true selves and our own identity from the scrutinizing eyes of society as a whole. However, by doing so, some tend to forget themselves. They no longer know if the mask is real or fake. They lose touch with themselves, and reality at the same time. Good work friend, keep the metaphorical jabs and kicks coming at those people, and you might just wake them up!

true! sometimes i find myself living a masquerade. wish you could always tell if it was life or acting!

i love it

just describes how most of us would do.

awww... that is so true... I know what you mean. This is going on my fav list.

love every single word

AHHH! Alternating colors! Messing wiht my eyes, man! Messing with my *braaiiinnn*! It kinda makes the words seem like they're moving! That's soooooo cool! OK, let me go read the poem now. I have a tendancy to skip over things like that in my excitement over little things. (Getting happy over little things makes the whole wide world that much brighter!) Whoa. Freak me out! I just found something to critique in your poem! That's almost blasphemy! ANYwho (deep breath) here goes!

I feel arms around me

They feel soothing and warm

Between darkness and light I feel slightly torn

Errrr. Exactly *how* many times did you say 'feel'? Ok,ok, That was harsh, but here come a big jiggly bowl a praise!

The cold and darkness promise release

But soft whispered words

Promise me peace

That stanza...love it! I love it, I lvoe it, I love it! It's just so dandy! (You should see me hopping up and down in my computer chair right now) So...deep. (Isn't it amazing how colling something 'deep' can make one seem incredibly shallow? But I'm at a loss for words here! Give me a break!) ANYwho (did i say that yet?) you made *another* heart-stopping poem! You know, some day you're going to give some old fart a heart attack from reading your inconceivably great poetry, and then what are ya gonna do? Just take this as a warning... (Stop being so gosh-be-darned great!)

You got this from CROSSING A ROAD! *Sputters incomprehensively* But..Whah... How?...Did...Oy. Ok, Ok. I'm better. I just went back and read the first 2 stanzas. Out of context, they sounds kinda naughty (oohh la-la!), but that's just because I have a gutter mind (tee hee!) Actually the 3rd stanza is even moreso. But that's OK, because the poem is very clean whenr ead all together. Geeze, inspired from crossing the road. And I thought *I* got my peoms from weir places! Once again, I bow down to you, oh Lady Poem.

AHHHHHH! Valentine's Day! Evill! Hissss! We women folk should round a possey and lynch the person who invented it! Argh, i just hate that dude! Tee hee. There was a typo in one of your lines! The first one I've seen in ur poems! Tee hee. At least this proved ur human and not some god of poetry. Relaxes me some, then makes me feel inadaquet(sp?) as an author. Dammit! Ur that good! Wow. That note at the end made me realize that not all ur poems may be something that really happened in your life. But, but... they just seems so, so... Wozers! I'm speechless again! Stop knocking my socks off! Now I have to go find them again! Where couls they be this time...

I just went to ur author's profile, and I think I could cry. You like Inu Yasha too! That mean's I'm the only one! (Yes, I realize that there is a fanfic section for the show and what I jsut said was extremely stupid) But, ANYwho, I'm going to go read the poem now. I kinda skipped over it cuz I was soo happy! *Person reads poem and reduced to a drooling, swooning mass on the floor.* Kawaiiiiiii! Wow. Ur work is just so,soo... Breathtaking! .Golly! Unbelievable! Words cannot even express how grea tI think this is! (And I'm too damned lazy to crack a thesaurus. Sry!)