Reviews for Far Away
Sorrowful Dreams chapter 1 . 3/28/2005
this is very well written. Very true at the same time. The rhyming is great! I love it, keep it up
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 3/26/2005
i know the want to leave and get away, escape... nice work and nice portrayal there ;)
L. Cybert chapter 1 . 3/25/2005
Yes...I liked it.
ShadowPharoh chapter 1 . 3/24/2005
my mom is strict. i'm gonna run away someday and live with my girlfriend. luvved the poem. my own eprson quote to you, "great poem, greater poet." thanks for the review.

SP
Lissewen chapter 1 . 3/24/2005
This is very good. I can see you have put a lot of emotion into this. I love the way its structured and written from a different point of view from most poems. Thank you for sharing and reviewing my poems :)
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 3/24/2005
Good poem! Keep writing!Thanks for reviewing me!Anna
SomeCowgirl chapter 1 . 3/24/2005
Oh, I liked this. Almost a short story, it has emotion.
crazy dog events chapter 1 . 3/24/2005
i thought your other one was much better. i think the last line in this one was good though.