great story! I can't wait for you to update, and I hope everything turns out ok with your best friend.

don't worry about it. just fix ur personal problems first. trust me, u'll regret putting that off more than u will updating. (I hope that made sense)

ca

this was great. your chapters are a little short but hopefully that just means you'll update more often, right? ok, well anyways, i loved it update soon!

Hey i read your story and its coming along amazingly. by the way i think it might be time to update:)!

update! update son!

not bad, not bad. i like it. please continue. And please update soon!

O! Snickers! Funny chapter but...snickers! That was the BEST part!

I love it, please keep going!

interesting...she's being overly nice for the character i thought she was, though. don't rush it!

interesting...one thing is you kinda switch perspectives, like when u write, "She suddenly raised her eyes from the table, and the stunningly violet color of her eyes pulled you in" it doesn't fit in, and the whole thing about the cop's daughter felt awkward.

um, yeah, her history seems too forced. but yeah, alex is an interesting charcter.

i like this chapter.

ca

Ok but the time is going really really fast. The 3 months are up right?

This is freakin awesome. I like the plot good boy and bad girl instead the ussual good girl and bad boy. Keep

i dont mind short chapters. easier to read.i'll wait for the next one before i give a proper review though