Reviews for Booster |
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![]() ![]() ![]() It's good I like bad girls more than boys because bad girls are 10 times worse. |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was great! Can't wait to read more. |
![]() ![]() hey, sorry i didn't feel like signing in. I have a driving test tomorrow. not to get my license but just a little check up thingy. Well it was lacking but it was better then nothin. lol. write more when ya can~Mel |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it. Update always as soon as possible don't worry about reviews... |
![]() ![]() yea its short... no its not bad...it just gives a bit more of the important parts in the plot. CA |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't necessarily enjoy this chapter; the other one was better. But it's a good start to introduce the tutor...update. |
![]() ![]() keep writing.. im so glad i can revciew again...lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() I do like it. You have got to keep on writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the story, but try and work on making the chapters longer, update soon, i wanna know what happens. Jorja : ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is great. seems like a great start. i can't wait to read more.~Mel |
![]() ![]() ![]() keep it - it may be short but it gets the point across maybe more of a scene in the police station or something but its sounding good |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nah don't change it! I liked it, the only bit was the ending that i felt was a little bit rushed. Well, not rushed, i loved all of it, but i think maybe another paragraph about WHY she's getting a tutor. Yes i know she's in Juvie but like, i dunno, i think i need to go to bed lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, great and very loaded chapter! Very well put together, and it's different having a girl doing this sorta thing instead of a guy... |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is really good so far. Add the next chapter soon. |
![]() ![]() awesome story |