I really love this poem, its just beautiful. You get the highest praise from me with this poem!I just love it, it seems...smooth, beautiful.I see gold rooms when I read it this is the greatest poem.*hugs* Well done with it!

Hey, I like this poem. There some much imagery and passion in the way you write. Keep on writing!

last line from the bottom has a small error: "colourds"

other than that it's cool.