Reviews for Tripping Up On Society's Shoe
SayIt'sWrong chapter 1 . 3/27/2005
Nice! Great imagery by using the shoe and the laces. The start opens really well and you close it well with the anger and your own personal done!QueenVixta
I Found Myself At 24 chapter 1 . 3/25/2005
*blinks* I sense a little anti-society anger here! lol :P Not my style, but definitely full of emotion.
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 3/25/2005
nice song. i dont think ive seen many songs from you. nice job
Rosanna28 chapter 1 . 3/25/2005
I love it. This is really really really good. I love the whole shoelaces idea. Makes me think: ''Damn, I wish I would've written something like that'' _

Very good, once again Hawke!

Much love, Rosanna.
Dr. Frank Was Right chapter 1 . 3/25/2005
This is excellent, another good piece of work.