Reviews for Out of Order
WYMamataro chapter 16 . 2/15/2013
This story is so messed up...but I can't stop reading it anyways! :D The protagonist pisses me of a lot but then again that's what makes a story interesting and keep it going. Can't wait to see what will happen next!
tilyfortwo chapter 16 . 12/25/2012
OH MY GOD. You have no idea how happy I am to see this story active again!

Slait is so scary. I'm still iffy on whether or not to trust Census. Then again, everyone seems to be kind of shady, but that's what keeps me hooked.

Thank you so much for continuing this!
BlackRoseG chapter 16 . 12/19/2012
I want to hate this story so badly but I just can't! Although i hate that she left Slait i'm hoping it wont just end there update soon!
witeaya chapter 1 . 12/17/2012
yay! u updated! welcome back :)
i think i have to reread the story bc i forgot some of the plot. so, will read and review more when its completed.
do continue writing,yeah.
rainydays chapter 16 . 12/8/2012
Just re read this whole thing! :) I still love Census and am so excited to read more
Jay827 chapter 16 . 12/2/2012
I just starting reading this and have finally caught up to this chapter. I love it so far, I think Census is my favorite character. I can't wait for you to update and read all about Slait going crazy! hahaha too great. :)
chrissy2911 chapter 16 . 12/1/2012
Wow u updated yay! I really hope u finish this I just reread the whole thing and still love this story it's very unique and I wish slain wasn't such a douche cause I think he and Torrie should be together
soo-hwa chapter 16 . 11/25/2012
JesustittyfuckingChrist, you're ALIVE.

Welcome back.
Starcrazed chapter 15 . 10/14/2011
love it
chrissy2911 chapter 15 . 7/18/2011
You should finish this atory even if it has been lik 3 years seriously
Scott Pilgram Is My World chapter 15 . 6/25/2011
! OMG how could u do this DX this is honesly the best and worst clifhanger ever. plssssssssssssss i wanna kno wat will happen soooooooooo badly :'O could u just tell us wat happens, u like dont even need to write details! i just have to kno!
dipintheriverstyx chapter 15 . 3/19/2011

I'm like dying here!

Holy shitsicles.

This is unreal.

Kinda like the Panthers.

Like Slait a bit too.


Please update?

Even though it's been three years?
witeaya chapter 15 . 1/14/2011
this story is truly amazing.

the plots were brilliantly written, the characters development was good oh, and 5 stars to originality.

at first my suspicion was that slait was a vampire but i was not that convinced cause he was just...wierder than a i dont really expect a serpent.

it was sad actually cause he already started to kinda like torrie.

and i really really dont like tiffany.

will you update the story? pls,pls do complete it.

i will wait for the update!
ktgirl14 chapter 15 . 9/6/2010
very interesting that tiff is against the serpents. . .
aryagal chapter 15 . 8/28/2010

this is pretty awesome although chapter fifteen was a bit of a twist (:

im thinkin that torries gonna end up with slait.

except then theres this whole conflict thing between teh panthers and serpants.

how confusing...

but its still really catching and im hooked (:

so, update?


like, now?
262 | Page 1 2 3 4 11 .. Last Next »