Reviews for My Other Half
FFNeko chapter 2 . 6/26/2006
Wee! Wonderful chapter. I now really want to know what happens next.

FFNeko chapter 1 . 6/22/2006
This was a very well written chapter... and story I guess if I get around to reading chapter 2. Very emotional, and exciting too. Good job!

Lai Anderson chapter 1 . 6/14/2006
really nice.

0.0 hmm, personal experience? i get the feel of it. so much emotion from the author... which is a good thing by the way.

keep it up!
Sesra chapter 2 . 6/14/2006
T_T Make your chatpers longer!

No complaints. Seriously!
Sesra chapter 1 . 6/14/2006
Great! One of the only stories that takes a normal basis, and it isn't complete crap!

Obviously, some of it come from experance, but that is your only downfall. The way you write, its like you are writeing to yourself, and not the reader. Though, I'd have no compaints reading the entire story as is.

You win the story of the day award, and its only 8:18 AM! _ (BTW: My Jenna is hot too!)
Ino chapter 1 . 11/1/2005
I never expected the ending to be such a way...nice job ) Interesting story, overall!
kuriatsu chapter 1 . 4/18/2005
I wanna know what happens next this seems like a good story could you update soon. I like this. it's quite interesting, it reminds me of something I cant place but it's there