Reviews for Collide
darkmistresslae chapter 1 . 8/6/2005
Wow. Powerful. And scary/sad. I liked it though. The rhyming scheme was very interesting. I liked it, I think it worked really well for this poem You did a very good job with finding rhymes without taking away from the seriousness of child abuse. Nice poem, really truly good job.
youzi chapter 1 . 4/28/2005
Very dark..the images are stark and arresting. Nicely done D
Roselillie chapter 1 . 4/5/2005
Aw that's so dark and powerful. I feel like I'm watching this poor girl getting beat and there's nothing i can do about it. Great poem. Nice choice of words and word order. Keep it up!
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/27/2005
wow.. very sad and powerful.. awesome poem