Reviews for The Devil and The Angel
Flutist chapter 12 . 4/17/2006
Hey, I have been following ur story from the beginning. It's really good. I don't think that I have been reviewing, but I usually don't so sry. But this is really good. Please update soon.
unpredicable17 chapter 12 . 4/17/2006
please don't let them die. Parker just proposed to Jade and they are so happy together. Ragetti need to just be arrested and sent to jail for being a crazy mob basterd. later if he feels obligated he can come back for his revenge on Parker. he can try the killing Jade thing again but he can do that in a few years.
unthinkable chapter 12 . 4/17/2006
can't wait to see what happens next! please update soon!
ellipsis.ellipsis chapter 12 . 4/17/2006
dOrKy-GuRl03 chapter 12 . 4/17/2006
o no...just hope that parker won't get killed or hurt...well anwyays loved it..well can't wait the next chapter to update though...well anyways going to head out peace out gurl...bye-bye then..just glad that you post too...
Nikkole15 chapter 12 . 4/17/2006
Where's the activity girl! Man I know alot of people who just getting engaged would do alot more than what they did. And there were a few run-ons. Over all though it was awesome. Lovely. But oh God how could Parker be so dumb and have the conversation right there when he knew it could have been wired. Idiots. So dumb. I'm not mad at you, I'm mad at Parker! Erg! lolz. I hope school is going good for you and I hope that you can update soon enough.

alyssa chapter 12 . 4/17/2006
ahh great chapter! so sweet that he proposed, but i can't wait to see what happens next! update soon please!
Moonlight Silver Wolf chapter 12 . 4/17/2006
AH! NO! She can't get killed. You have to update soon. I really can't wait to see how it unfolds.
BrownEyedBeauty chapter 12 . 4/16/2006
OMG. Please don't let them die! That was a great chapter, and lot's of dialogue is good. I'm so happy that Parker proposed to Jade. That is so nice. And what he did for her on her birthday was so sweet. I can't wait to see what happens next, and I hope it's good.

Update soon! D
helligonian chapter 11 . 4/13/2006
This is soo good. It's original and great!
peachfruitsalad chapter 11 . 3/7/2006
this is really good!um, just a suggestion, though, when you're writing dialogue, you put a comma after the last words the person says if you're going to write something like 'she said', or 'he said' or whatever.

e.g. "Everything is ok." She whispered softly.- should be: "Everything is ok," she whispered softly.

update soon, plz! p
mysterybookworm12 chapter 11 . 3/7/2006
Great update! I'm glad Ragetti feels a little bad about maybe having to hurt Jade. I loved the end, Jade and Parker are so sweet together! Please update the story ASAP.
theeighthhouse chapter 11 . 3/3/2006
oh so ragetti does feel guilt eh?
Ki'alla chapter 11 . 3/3/2006
This is a great story. Its very smooth and really easy to read. PLEASE update soon.
HarryPotterSNL chapter 11 . 3/1/2006
OMG! You've updated! And it was such a good chapter. I just loved it! It was an amazing chapter. I love it when Jade and parker and together. Just made me day! Try to update soon! Please, I am aware you have a life but I could totally teach you something about procrastination.
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