Reviews for The Devil and The Angel
jess chapter 4 . 8/30/2005
please review soon! love your story
xgummihattx chapter 4 . 8/29/2005
like the story immensely. keep up the excellent writing! update again soon!
HarryPotterSNL chapter 4 . 8/29/2005
You updated! Yay! You have no idea how much better this makes my day. I mean it takes my mind off of school! Which seems to be taking up the majority of my time! So please update as soon as you get a chance. I cant wait to see what happens between Jade and Parker.
Brettle chapter 4 . 8/28/2005
Cool chapter, but don't leave us hanging for too long!

Please update soon! Pretty please?

anyways, wicked shapter, nice work
Waterlily-otter chapter 4 . 8/27/2005
Yeah! You updated! I loved it! The chemistry is awesome between the two. Keep it up!
MizSphinx chapter 4 . 8/27/2005
Do you know how long I've been waiting for this chappie? (Note the long line of question marks please). BUT you've redeemed yourself from getting the 'sleepy hollow guy' coming after you by making this chappie totally great! Please update soon!
alyssa chapter 4 . 8/27/2005
aww, they're so cute together! i love this story, update soon!
fuzzinuzzi421 chapter 4 . 8/26/2005
Hey, I just finished reading through the first four chapters of your story, and so far so good. Not sure I have any criticism, constructive or otherwise, but in chapter four, you made a typeo about 2/3 through writing "say" instead of "day." Just FYI. Looking forward to your next update!
Anonymous chapter 4 . 8/26/2005
Wow, great fic! The chapter was really well-put together, and I can't wait for the next one.
Heather F. C chapter 4 . 8/26/2005
it was so cute! they are truely yin and yang! i love them both, update sooner!
miss katerella chapter 4 . 8/26/2005
omg...I LOVE YOUR totally.

they're going back to his place? Do I sense some drama coming up?

Anyway...keep up the good work!
LilLaTLuv chapter 4 . 8/26/2005

O! I wonder what he has planned! Hehehe. She's so adorably innocent! I can't wait to see what will happen next! UPDATE SOON! Please?

Luv ya,Tashi :)
Alison Ashley chapter 4 . 8/26/2005
This was a good chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next. Please write more SOON.

Lexie M chapter 4 . 8/26/2005
Yea! You've finally updated. Way to go Jade for being courageous enough to ask Parker on a date, taking in some of his history and being accepting of his mistakes.

Oh no not a cliffhanger. I hope you don't leave us hanging for too long. I can hardly wait for the next chapter. please let it be sooner rather than later.
Desert Illusion chapter 4 . 8/26/2005
Wow! Yeah, Cat, it's been a long time since you've updated, but oh! He's taking her to HIS house! Haha! Lets see what happens there...not that anything is supposed to happen, oh whatever! You KNOW what I mean! hehhe! Anyways, so take care and UPDATE AGAIN! It was a good chapter. Nice on the background detail of Parker's life. )

Loads of love,-Maha
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