Reviews for More than I crave
Plinky chapter 1 . 1/11/2006
Fantastic ending. XD
Nothing Profound chapter 1 . 8/23/2005
This is fantastic- I love your word choice; it makes everything seem more palpable.
hollyg20 chapter 1 . 8/4/2005
I really liked this poem. I'm sure I will be reading it again and again...thanks for posting :)
Thyrt chapter 1 . 6/1/2005
the ending..was like poem
lyra Silvertongue13 chapter 1 . 5/17/2005
bloody brilliant...-Lyra
Clap Clap Raise Your Hands chapter 1 . 5/13/2005
interesting, reminds me a bit of me poem Icy Fingers but hmm yeah i like this, shows, at least to me, how people can be so hard and cold on the outside but inside they're insecure, or maybe showing how you take the pain she causes because you love her, i could be well off but this is what i got out of the poem, nice use of brackets, great structure x weasel within x
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 4/24/2005
i like this, its a good piece.
rocket baby doll chapter 1 . 4/15/2005
this is really interesting... i like how it's different, you know, you can't tell quite what's reality.. and, you have got to love the brackets.. :P
Aslan Israel chapter 1 . 3/31/2005
Wow. Just beautiful. flows perfectly. Brava!
diesoz chapter 1 . 3/31/2005
this is a really cool poem. And the role reversal of an abusive girlfriend instead of vice versa is really what I like.
PineTheFae chapter 1 . 3/30/2005
eep! It gives me chills! Hauntingly beautiful.
renru-no-ren chapter 1 . 3/30/2005
*thumbs up* put pictures in my head I wish weren't there. kinda cool.
Julie Poe chapter 1 . 3/29/2005
I loved it!
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 3/28/2005
Interesting.
Simply Stupid chapter 1 . 3/28/2005
Wow! Powerful and strong. I love the image. Especially the first line. Thankyou very much for your review as well.
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