Reviews for Butterflies
charisma1525 chapter 1 . 4/11/2005
I really enjoyed this poem. There was something about it that just really spoke to me. Maybe it's because this is something that is really relateable...at least I can relate to it. So I just wanted to say that I think that you did a really good job with this.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/29/2005
i can totoally relate.. great job & i love the repition of the butterflies
xoxoMizzatxoxo chapter 1 . 3/28/2005
really good i had memories of the same thing after i watched this video that me and my ex was on u no it kinda brought back the memories
AllyCred chapter 1 . 3/28/2005
i love the ending and i know exactly how you feel...beautiful...so well written...you're getting better and better. lots of love AllyCred
silverquill212 chapter 1 . 3/28/2005
Wonderful metaphorical poem! At first you think the butterflies are just the normal fluttering of the heart at the sight of the one you love, but then the last stanza really shows them for what they are-love. I absolutely adore that last stanza. The rhymes are light but powerful, and you have successfully and magnificently captured the essence of your feelings.

*added to favorite stories list D