|Reviews for Straight From The Heart|
| hO0d chapter 1 . 9/2/2005
You're writing is top notch. You seem like an interesting person. I feel like I can strongly relate to the things I see in your writing. There's a feeling I get when I read the words you've laid out that I can't quite explain. IM me sometime if you wanna chat, I'd like to get to know you, if you wouldn't mind... keep writing
| Frodo chapter 1 . 4/12/2005
This poem is really powerful, and it really touches anybody who has close friends who are engaging in self-mutilation and are depressed. Friends want to help, but sometimes it seems that nothing they say matters. This is really really good, Sarah Parker. I love your work, and this is one of the best so far. -Micah
| Cloud Burst chapter 1 . 4/6/2005
wow this is just utterly provocative... such imagery! this was awesome!
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/31/2005
my god.. that is insanely powerful.. especially the ending.. beautiful poem
| S.C. Preclarus Noctis chapter 1 . 3/29/2005
Gah. Fae. You're awesome. I loved this...it was so sad, with a lot of pretty metaphors. I'm in love with it...the last line is so...RIGHT THERE!. *tear* Hahaha. *makes no sense* You rock! "I think you are really fit, you're fit but my gosh don't you know it" Gah. I have that song by The Streets stuck in my head. Woah..totally off the subject. So yeah..you rock at writing, you rock at poetry. I think you should publish your works so I can buy it! .
| acccountkiller chapter 1 . 3/29/2005
Omg...*blinks*...speechless...this certainly is straight from the heart...I don't know what words can describe how much this poem took my breath away...it brought tears to my eyes...Sarah if you ever dare argue with me again when I say you're a breathtaking, genius author...I think I'll stop talking to you...which would be a shame 'cause you're a marvellous, wonderful person I'd love to meet...this is incredible, and I really hope no one ever hurts you *again*...I think I completely understand this, but I won't be so presumptious as to be sure...am completely speechless...I would put all your most recent poems on my favourites list if only I had enough space, but this one is definitely going there...Lots of love, Mia
| A Painter of Poems chapter 1 . 3/29/2005
i'm totally speechless. how did you do that? this one is going on my favorite stories list for sure. keep on writing!
| Heather Montgomery chapter 1 . 3/28/2005
Faerie.. I love you. And.. I'm sorry. I really am. I don't want to hurt you, not at all. It means so much to me that you care about me.. but you don't need to worry about me. *HUGS* Amin mela lle, my little Faerie. You mean so much to me... I don't know what I'd do without you.
| Ruarc chapter 1 . 3/28/2005
That's... breathtaking. I can't tell you exactly *what* it is that make it so, but this is just incredible. I think it's the emotion in it, or something.
"the blade that carves the woundsis the one that digs the gravewith a heart set in a tombstoneher pain ensnares a willing slave"
Whoa. This is just... phenomenal.
| Bleeding Ink chapter 1 . 3/28/2005
Sad, very emotional.