Reviews for Frosting Flowered Vision
Sarah-Brighteyes chapter 1 . 8/1/2005
Wow I could see an image in my mind here. My favorite image was the "pink frosing-flowers over my eyes"...Wow that was beautiful and blinding. I love it. The last line was bam... you got it, the audience, completely where you want them... wonderful piece. Bravo to you.
Thyrt chapter 1 . 4/11/2005
that's..whoa..that's really good..i didn't see the ending coming..great poem :D
like a lover chapter 1 . 4/8/2005
gorgeous and refreshing. bittersweet. unique in its own way.

my favourite part:

"You pour cold cream over my body,

And it feels refreshing over my cellophane skin.

But it soaks through.

.And I am drown.

You say you want the best for me

So why do you always break my bones?"

why don't you have a million reviews for this? i thought it was great. it's definitely going on my favourite's list. C: