Reviews for Take the Jump
Blue Screen of Death chapter 1 . 2/2/2007
*Blink* Just what kind of conersation are we talking 'bout here? It is an interesting rhyme, don't get me wrong...And that is quite the unusual portrayel of suicide. I like ;)

If I'm not careful, I'm totally going to catch myself saying that aloud with my friends or something in school and get some rather weird stares...It's that catchy.

Huh. Nice job, for spur of the moment inspiration. Easily better than anything I could whip up actually -trying-.
BrokenRain chapter 1 . 5/6/2005
That was awesome! I truely loved it

xox
Maxwell K chapter 1 . 3/30/2005
Never thought id see such a funny poem about suicide. I see this as a satire about all the other depressed poems every made. Very nice.
AllyCred chapter 1 . 3/29/2005
i like it gives a very vivid picture in my mind and i have to say that its very well written and i love the ending. lots of love AllyCred
dragonsdream13 chapter 1 . 3/28/2005
uh huh...whatever that person had to say too you must not have been that interesting...