that was hillarious. I'm like that when i'm drunk too, i get really mellow xD

i love clyde. he reminds me of myself. It was a good idea doing this story in third person, his thought process is hilarious.

It's been a while since I read this story now, and I'm almost ashamed not to have put it in my favourites before, or that I didn't review. But lastly, you've written something unique here, and I'm definitely going to read it over again. Basta.

-Kanilla

I love this story...it made me burst into laughter throughout xD I loved the way you portrayed Clyde...I loved his names for everyone, like Third Floor Office Guy xD I love the writing style...ahh lets just say that I love everything in this story (times infinity)

o.o

This was so well written and the story was great. I.. honestly have no words to describe it besides saying I haven't slept yet tonight.. well this morning now because I have been reading this all night?

Excellent story. I enjoyed it. Loved Clyde, he was such a bastard in the story but yet funny. I'm happy Sam got him to loosen up a bit. I loved it even more when Clyde threw a stapler at Rob. Very funny. Adding this to my favorites now.

I love his reaction to his birthday.

It's funny in that weird depressing way that I relate to people who hate life but can't be bothered to end theirs...

Hahaha.

I really like the fact that he likes children. It makes him cute (in a weird, strange way) and easier for younger readers to empathise (though those snotty high school kids won't be too happy).

I was annoyed at your random capitalisations, for example: 'Lanes', and the fact that you put 'Pay' after a colon, it should still be 'pay'.

Heh...

I have a couple of things I'd like to say:

a) 'ramen' shouldn't be capitalised. It isn't a proper noun (like a name; Suzie, Ben, th Eiffel Tower)

b) the abrupt scene change was a little weird

Other than those, the chapter's good; lots of detail and description...

I really like this story.

You've created a beautiful character here: painfully sarcastic and unwilling to let anything (apart from his dog/wolf) in. Also, he knows about the risk of cigarettes, but he doesn't give a damn.

Clyde's little nicknames are also quite cute: Third Floor Guy, deliberately telling us that he doesn't want to have anything to do with him.

I like the way he narrates to us in a lesson format, teaching us, while still sneaking in stuff about his daily life.

What I love about Third Floor Guy is his faithful, kicked puppy approach. He's going to continue "annoying" Clyde until his dying day, and I love him for that.

You're doing well with this!

woot. woot.

:)

i rly rly enojyed reading this story. amusing and funny and awesome. *fav

Amazing story! In fact, I'm completely speechless... I love it!

~Dawn

i read this one on other people recommendation and wow..! what they told me about this story is just didnt give justice to it..i just love how you make Clyde a bitter mean person cause its hilarious! i can see how Sam can actually feel attracted to him..its his mean charm that make him irresistible..and they are so compatible..its like they fit together isnt it? and i love Max..i love to get a husky dog they are so cool and unique!

Amazing story. I love how the characters felt so real, and how Clyde changed over time. Awesome. A defiante must read!