Reviews for If They Knew
Thyrt chapter 1 . 4/3/2005
well, i think it's good:D and it is!
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/31/2005
not your best, but interesting
Candice Seibel chapter 1 . 3/31/2005
I like the irnoy of the line " avoiding all the questions" and yet yoiu ask questions of your own in the poem, i'm not sure if it was intentional, but it adds a nice touch. Great job, yet again.
Bong2 chapter 1 . 3/29/2005
It is still good writing. Your thoughts are as important as any other source of inspiration if not the most important. Good Writing though and it hits close to home. So I have to enjoy reading that reflects how I feel...Keep it up.

Poetically Yours,

B. Rosser

P.S. ThaNk you for the reviews and good criticism.
A.Solitaire chapter 1 . 3/29/2005
what do you mean it's not that good. I love it. I can feel the words, its
AllyCred chapter 1 . 3/29/2005
i have to say its not one of ur best...but nonetheless its very good, i can relate to this especially the constant running...i like it, it has heart in it and kinda makes you feel like you have to run or hide or just get out...nice piece. lots of love ~AllyCred~