Reviews for Story
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/31/2005
i liek it.. tsi a sad story & nice repition
AllyCred chapter 1 . 3/30/2005
i love well written and so much emotion coming from this...simply amazing...*WOW*...*Superb* lots of love ~AllyCred~
DementedOracle chapter 1 . 3/29/2005
This was really intriguing until more towards the end. I felt that you began to express feelings so rapidly and subjectively that I was a bit left out. i.e. I felt like would have had to have been the writer to understand properly what you were saying.

I don't mean that as negative criticism, per say, it's just the impression I had.