EXCELLENT.

That was so sad! I can't believe the story ended that way. It was really good, but really sad.

Just wanted to let you know that FlaminAngel and GodzGirl are the same person, that is, they are both me. Fortunatly, I have access to a computer now that will let me actually have an account, so FlaminAngel is the account I will use. Hopefully, I'll have stories up in a week or two. Maybe you'll come check them out? Pretty please?

Oh, that is so sad! hwo come all the good stories have sad endings?Oh, well, excellant job!

I find it a bit odd that someone could be put in jail for murder in the middle of a war. Isn't that what war is? Murdering people? I suppose you could justify your story by saying that Lynt and Daniel were on the same side, and therefore Daniel hadn't shot the enemy, but a comrade. It still seems odd to me though.

But I sort of liked the fact that Daniel died in the end. Don't get me wrong, he was sweet and everything, but if you want to make it realistic then it's best that you did what you did. Someone in jail for murder most likely wouldn't be able to escape and would end up dying, so I liked your choice for the ending.

Good job!

After everything that they went through to be together, things end up like that? It's so sad! I know that in real life that's wut would have happened, but it's still sad.

What did he die of and when? Did I miss that whole thing? I don't get it.

I am a bit disspointed with the way it ended. Why couldn't Daniel live *cries*. I don't handle bad endings in romantic storys. Could you tell? *winks*. Thats not to say you don't write well, which you do. A very talented girly.

That *sniffle* was a beautiful story! So well-done and bittersweet! I'm afraid I don't handle tragedies well. I can't help wishing that Daniel stayed alive and married Caroline. I don't think I can ever forgive you for killing him, but I like this story all the same! And I actually do think this was a beautiful ending. Good job!

sweet-sara2100. This is a great story thus far. I can't wait for the next

like i said on the phone, a few typos but like i said on one of my other reviews: who cares about typos when you have an awesome story. i am really mad the way you ended it after my hopes were all high, but whatever... GREAT JOB

Good so far. I like the plot. I'll have to finish it later.

sb

Daniel and Caroline can't be apart. That would be so sad!

Hang on a second. He's not really going to die, is he? Of course not. You're not that mean. I mean, he's going to live and marry Caroline, right? He has to! Or else I'll never forgive you! In the next chapter I fully expect things to mend. PLEASE!

Oh! This story is so good I don't want it to end.