update soon please I have to find out what happened next

Oh my, I can't wait to see what will happen next! Xoxo Robin

Really interesting start! I like how you describe your characters. It feels like you're making a list. Xoxo Robin

Need...moarr!
Im regretting not discovering this before it got rewritten ;_;

I loved it! it was slightly disturbing though...you should keep writing
btw my friend and I both read this and reviewed on one account

You should put Hakuji in the hospital at some point. This is interesting, but disgusting. i feel like this is too private to read, it gave my goosebumps!

Please update this soon

please update!

talk about being addicted in a bad sense. it's a great story, it really is. but i have a quesiton: what's the title mean? i normally don't bother with little details like that, but i can't help to not be curious. i feel terrible for the kid, and i can only imagine what's going to happen from here. :(

well, i don't much of anything to say except, despite mirage being a bit of a jerk, i actually like him since he bothered to help the kid.

ferret nin

You've got me hooked! Please update soon!

Wonderful, the lemon/lime, the oncoming plot, how descriptive you are, it's all very good. I'm in love with your writing style! That one boy not being able to talk sort of finishes the deal.

Update it! Update it now! I said now! I want you to update it dammit! Gr... I need you to update it! So just please do it! (Picture me using Stewy's voice from Family Guy while holding a gun to your head)

i think the pairings:Hakuji and Mirage would go perfectly continue this story,i loved it so far!:)

Hmm.. I really enjoyed both chapters...plzz update soon:D

MY GOD! You know how to write!

BEST STORY OF MY LIFE. Post the next chapter. Please. Please. Please. Oh My God. I need it.