Reviews for Cocoon
deleted-123-45 chapter 1 . 3/25/2005
Another very effective haiku, though I'm not sure about the number of lines. Even though the syllable count is right, you can't change the form like that. But somehow I like your four-line verse style even better than the traditional.
Moroni's Daughter chapter 1 . 9/20/2004
Pippi chapter 1 . 2/4/2001
This isn't a review, but I had to say this, and your email isn't up. I don't much like haikus, but I like BAD haikus. This one's my favorite, and I would like to share it with you.

Is this a joke, Frank?

A kangaroo chia pet?

This present sucks ass.

Have a great day. Keep writing.
Elene chapter 1 . 2/2/2001
Hmm, I don't know much about haiku, but the way I learned it in US is that it has three lines, with 5-7-5 syllables, or are there different forms of haiku? Anyways I think this poem is great, the feeling of a new life awakening, awesome :) - Elene
traeumenHerz chapter 1 . 1/24/2001
Hmmmmm...not what I thought it would be from the title...but still lovely and elegant!