Reviews for Everything For Love
LoveRehab chapter 14 . 5/5/2007
LoveRehab chapter 13 . 5/5/2007
wow this just keeps getting better and better
LoveRehab chapter 12 . 5/5/2007
that was great. lol on to the next chapter
LoveRehab chapter 11 . 5/5/2007
HAHA THAT WAS GREAT! sorry but i got to check the next chapter now.
LoveRehab chapter 9 . 5/5/2007
I like that she calls her brother. I don't know why, but I feel angry at Kelley. Weird. Like, dude, I'm feeling exactly what Shana is. lol That's so good. It means that this story is very realistic and smooth.
LoveRehab chapter 8 . 5/5/2007
Yet another installment of an awesome chapter. Love how she IMs her friends. It sort of shows that she wants to talk to someone and it also shows how her and her friends acted together. She seems more comfortable with them.



Ba da ba ba ba I'm lovin' it. (Sorry I have that McDonald song stuck in my head haha)
LoveRehab chapter 7 . 5/5/2007
Nice chapter once again. Liked that Kelly noticed Shana staring at Ryan. That was a nice touch. Still waiting for him to have more to say. Rachel Marie still seems to have him whipped. lol

Like the bit about Jon's pornostrips.

Also liked the French hip hop artists unique, because it isn't what you expect from a punk rock guy. Love that.
LoveRehab chapter 6 . 5/5/2007
Nice chapter. Nice name. Ryan. Ah I love that Alison's brother is Ryan. That was the highlight of this chapter.

I'm slightly disappointed though. It's like Kelley doesn't have a mind of his own. He's just like, I'm Rachel Marie's bitch. haha

But I'm sure that's going to change or something's going to get him to talk more.
LoveRehab chapter 5 . 5/5/2007
Whoa! That was an awesome chapter! I call it the beginning of the rebellion! My favorite chapter by far. I really like that she flicks the bird to Kelley. That was perfect. It's good that she can contain her composure after that incident.

You brought Hot-Guy-From-The-Mall back! Yes! Nice.
LoveRehab chapter 4 . 5/5/2007
Nice touch with the hair dye conversation. Guy at the mall seems like a interesting guy. Hopegully we'll be seeing him again? hm? I'm checking it out. I can't wait so I'll make my review longer for the next chapter.
LoveRehab chapter 3 . 5/5/2007
I like the ending of this chapter about Lavendar and freaking out about a little thing like that because you need something. Kelley was in this chapter! He seems real stand-offish...kind of annoying. lol But I'm sure the two of them are going to have to talk sometime or another.
LoveRehab chapter 2 . 5/5/2007
Nice chapter. Love it. Her dad seems really cool. His personality is unique, which is really good because some people make dads total sticks in the mud. (I don't even know what that means, but I think I'm trying to say they make dads into these stiff guys)

I like that you made Shana guess that her Mom was getting married...or I mean that it went through her mind. It makes the moment very realistic.

No Kelley in this chapter, but I guess I should've know. *frowns*
LoveRehab chapter 1 . 5/5/2007
Hey! (This is A. Teen Psycho, my new pen name! YAY!) I love this story. I like Kelley's determination to not talk much or make an effort to get to know his dad's girlfriend and her daughter.

Lover Shana's personality, too. Very funny. I couldn't help laughing at the alcoholic bit. Also liked the part about Kelley not being able to learn in a normal environment. haha. That was a nice touch.
Birds and Boats chapter 27 . 4/10/2007
nice story, please update, 12 months, ye gads, thats a while, hope history doesn't repeat itself
DragonFaeLynn chapter 27 . 3/15/2007
Hey, I have read this story up to chapter 25 before. Hmm.. Good story, didn't mind reading it a 2nd time. Hope you get inspired enough to update the next chapter soon, I can't wait to read it! Good luck!
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