Reviews for Everything For Love
ONEthousandWORDs chapter 9 . 4/11/2005
I love this story. So much. Wow. But yes... Shana's father is munderful. Her mother is adorable. Kelley is shmexeh. (Yes, that is is "sexy" all dolled up and ready for a night on the town.) I definitely need someone to yell at me like that sometimes, when I'm being a total and complete idiot. Ryan is hot... or would be if Shana stopped drooling over him quite so much. Anna is annoying and needs to be smacked. But I mean that in the best possible way. Rachel Marie ALSO needs to be smacked. Nicely. Cause I like her... she's just too driven. Way too driven. She needs something in her life that doesn't involve 132146967 tons of motivation. I like Steve (Kelley's da) cause... who doesn't love a chef? And I like that guy that Shana had a chat with on the beach... John? But he's a nice guy. Mos def. o-
ONEthousandWORDs chapter 8 . 4/11/2005
Generally, I hate IM conversations in works of literature. It just doesn't work. The one in this chapter however is marevelous. Good work. Also, I find it fascinating that Shana manages to have such an open, upbeat out look on life (being nice to her step-father-to-be, keeping from getting overly bitter about the move, gaining a group of friends so quickly) and yet can't stand the thought that maybe Rachel Marie is a person with fears and imperfections of her own (though it seems unlikely... XD) and that Kelley might be wonderful and have great depth of character, as well as being a bit more pessimistic and resentful that Shana is moving into his life and he has NO SAY in the matter. Fascinating. Not at all unbelievable or problematic, mind you. Humans are amazingly inconsitent, quirky creatures. Just fascinating. Your characters are amazingly, wonderfully three dimensional. Or Shana is, and I have hopes for the rest of them. _
MoonWinged-Faerie chapter 7 . 4/10/2005
This is so awesome...I love the characters you've created. Update soon, I can't wait to read more.
ONEthousandWORDs chapter 7 . 4/9/2005
I loveses this. Yay for updating! _ I've never been very attracted to tattoos, but I could almost change my opinion for the Ryan that you describe so wonderfully.
Falcone chapter 7 . 4/9/2005
HAHAHA! Jon is just too hilarious! Porno comic? HAHAHA! HAHAHAHA! My stomach is hurting cause I'm laughing so much! HAHAHAHA!

Great chapter! Love it!

Falcone chapter 6 . 4/9/2005
I really liked how you began this chapter. It was seriously funny with the "I'm not a quitter," thing and then the ancedotes are all screwed cause they ended up badly. It was an awesome opening. And then the whole thing just kind of flowed on. Nothing was stilted. I think it's one of my fav chapters.

And the ride in the car with her punker hottie a.k.a. Ryan. Nice descriptions there! He sounds-ahah-so hot! Tattoos are awesome! And eyebrow rings are very my thing! I'm getting mine on my birthday!

So again, that was great!
Falcone chapter 5 . 4/9/2005
HAHA! She flipped him! I did not see that coming! I guess I should have. But I really didn't!

That chapter was so funny! My fav part was when Shana sat inbetween Lauren and Anna. That was hilarious. And they are friends? Yikes!

Again! HAHAHA! She fingered Kelley! Very expertly done.
Falcone chapter 4 . 4/9/2005
I like this chapter too! The conversation with her friend Meagan was neat. Meagan sounds a bit like me, crying alot because of major sensitivity and all. And my name is very similar! Lol!

O...and the part where Shana was staring at the punk guy in the mall. Nice!
Falcone chapter 3 . 4/9/2005
It's going great and you definetly are updating fast! I have been reading them as you posted the chapters but there just isn't any time to review! So now I thought I would catch up!

Anyways...this story is still really good! I really like your characters. They are really developed like you know everything about them. Shana is definetly my fav. She makes me laugh so much.

Mis chapter 7 . 4/8/2005
Really liking your story so far... I just wish there were more of it I could read 'cause I have a tendency to forget to check on fics, names of them, etc...
anonymous chapter 7 . 4/8/2005
Can't wait to read more! Please update as soon as you can!
BreakingCharlotte chapter 5 . 4/6/2005
This was really good. I can't wait for the rest. Keep it up.
ONEthousandWORDs chapter 5 . 4/6/2005
Oh wow! (There is really no way to explain this, but... imagine that being said in a high, breathless voice. Yes, it does indeed have sexual connotations. Or whatever you'd call that? But it's one of the funniest things on the planet.) Mkays, so this story magical. Well written, and clearly a subject (highschool, teenagers, possibly also moving) that you know well. As someone who moved for the first time ever in my life over the summer (from the midwest to D. C.) I appreciate this story even more. Fortunately, no marriages/divorces/hot soon-to-be-step brothers were involved. Just moving. And hating my parents in a loving way. But really... thank you very much for writing this. And I hope like anything that you keep writing it. _
Wayward Ballerina chapter 3 . 4/5/2005
Fantastic story. Hope you udate soon..
Falcone chapter 2 . 3/31/2005
Yay! That was a fast update! This chapter was really good. It was a bit more serious than the last chapter, but still really funny. Shana's little side comments in her head are excellent. I loved that part when her dad was saying how all these little beauties or whatever were gonna her heartbroken. He kind of reminds me of my dad! Lol...funny. And when Shana was saying how her mum just put the news out to her dad. That was hilarrious! "Sugar? Thanks. Steve and I are getting married." I could imagine just this balnk serious face asking stuff about the coffee and just saying about the marriage without even hestiating! It was really good!

So...I ramble way too much! UPDATE! XD!
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