|Reviews for So the World Keeps Spinning|
| Grace Cleo chapter 1 . 3/30/2005
Good job. Confusing setup, so i can't tell if you meant this to be a song oh yes, you did but the lines aren't really important.
SUGGESTION: the chorus is hard to decipher from the random like 3 verses between , excellent job, i like the choice of subject. Dancing Tears