Reviews for Tears
Tutube chapter 1 . 5/26/2005
_! *squeek* i wuv it! it has a very nice rythm,and i love how eloquently you've worded it. The best lines!: "Betrayer of your image Soothsayer to your heart" It sort of reminds me of another one of my poems, but it has no title "At any rate, great poem! keep it up!
wishingdreamingwaiting chapter 1 . 5/24/2005
you're a good writer. and the (two) poems i've read of yours so far are really interesting. this one is just as good as the last!
Saeger chapter 1 . 4/23/2005
Truth in few or no words. That tears are... And that your poem is.
meowsha chapter 1 . 4/14/2005
i really like your poem. it's a nice side to sadness in this world, which is hellish.
Keelin Rhayne chapter 1 . 4/8/2005
Ohh I love it x3 and also, thanks for reviewing some of my poems
JuxA Person chapter 1 . 4/4/2005
VERY NICE, you're a great writer, such great topics and the way voice them, i think i'm in love with your style
Amaranth of Grey chapter 1 . 4/3/2005
That was beautiful. So wonderfully did you convey the torture of bitter tears in every dimmention, and in so few words. I am thoroughly impressed
Clap Clap Raise Your Hands chapter 1 . 4/2/2005
all very true, i like this poem, especially the first two lines x weasel within x
ShadowPharoh chapter 1 . 4/1/2005
wonderful. thanks for the review!

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dustytiger chapter 1 . 3/31/2005
this is a really great peice, wow, i always try to do peieces just about crying, and they never work, so i really like it when i find people who can pull it off, and you did it very well, thank you for the review!