Reviews for Fighting Back
Lady Hoshi chapter 1 . 5/31/2005
Sweet poem. I can def. feel the emotions. Short but sweet. It's realIt's LifeIt's the past
Unknown Unnamed chapter 1 . 4/5/2005
Oh wow. I love the short lines. Authoritative figures, not to mention parents, can seem so horribly constricting and can make you feel so bad about yourself. I just hate it. Anyways, great, awesome, spifftacular poem. _
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 4/5/2005
love the end!
tutu boxshoes girl chapter 1 . 4/3/2005
Hey ya'll I know I've said this before...but I relate to this poem...It's really good and I love reading poems I can relate to, because it gives me the feeling that I'm not alone...and that's something I feel alot.
Karma Chameleon chapter 1 . 3/31/2005
Though I like this, it seems more like a rant than a poem. Perhaps if you spaced it a little differently... I don't like the fragmented style for this one, though it works on some, I don't think it does here. ~Karma Chameleon
Wistera chapter 1 . 3/30/2005
That last line is a swift kick in the crotch. I love this, it's very powerful and emotional without being sappy. Nice.
Sorrowful Dreams chapter 1 . 3/30/2005
this is very deep and emotional. Sorry to hear what's been going on with your father. hope every gets better.