|Reviews for seventeen girl|
| Forgotten Secrets chapter 1 . 8/28/2010
I love this one so much. Excellent job.
| AK the Twilight chapter 1 . 6/12/2008
You portray the pressures of teenage anxiety very, very well in this song, which also manages to create the song mechanics well as well. "Swimin' into tears and laughs," was a strong and defining line throughout. The whole thing could've used more of that clever imagery and descriptiveness, but I found this to be an interesting and clever song. Great job; keep it up!
| Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 11/13/2007
Inspiring song. Nice work. (I run out of things to say while reviewing if you can't tell already.)
| gooey chapter 1 . 6/28/2005
Really powerful piece. i love the message at the end. Great work!
| Keaira the little dark one chapter 1 . 3/31/2005
Good poem i liked it alot.