That's no fair! You can't just end it right there! What's going to happen next? Where is Kinamori? Are they going to destory the dragon king? Come on! Give me something here. I REALLY WANT to know! PLEASE up-date! I don't want to beg, but if I have to I will. PLEASE! **begging on knees** See, I beg. PLEASE up-date soon! I want to know what happenes. If I'm begging you to up-date, that means that this story has to be good. Write you later!

Wow. Things are starting to et interesting. I'll have to read more when I get back, but now I say it is very good. Keep pu the great work and hope to read your story soon. Write you later! ;)

No way! I knew it! Write you later! ;)

Hold the phone! What just happened? This is getting good. Who is this strange man? Things might be looking up for Kinamori. Keep up the great work! Write you later! ;)

That was a little unexpected. Who would have thought. I feel so bad for Kinamori. To feel being eaten alive. **shivers** Keep up the good work. Write you later! ;)

Oh, no! What's ging to happen to her now? Keep up the great work! Write you later! ;)

Creepy. I would hate to live in such a place. Know I'm wondering who's going to save her and will she get out before she dies? Great chapter. Keep up the great work. Write you later!

Wow. Intersting so far. I like how you did the begining. Very mysterious. Wants me to keep on reading. Good thing that I have a lot more chapters to go. Ya, me! Keep up the great writing. Write you later! ;)

By god, but you were right on the forum when you said that this thing was long! Forty eight thousand words! I've only read chapter 1, but it seems good. Please keep going at this. I know what writers block feels like, so I sympathise. But please, think of the readers.

It would be nice if you were to review Rakarskia: The Soldier in return.

shes 10 what perverts they are

Wow. I really enjoyed this first part. I am a little confused though with the way you space your time order. It seems that some of them could actually be together rather than seperate. Otherwise though I find this extremely preplexing and look forward to reading more. Good job!

the first two chapters were very nice. Good stuff, the introduction I feel was highly interesting and as for the boy disappearing, I somehow have a feeling that he'll become a kick-ass warrior or something like that and save his childhood friend and...you know...Forgive me if my speculation's wrong...XD

Hm, very nicely written out chapters as I have said though I would prefer a more detailed introduction to Kinamori...she appears to be like one pretty chick but is she?

NO! THEY CAN'T DIE! The resistance, I mean. And everyone else. Ah SO INCREDIBLY fantastic. It was nice to have two updates in such a short period of time.. ]

WO for an update! **does happy dance**Very nice chapter! And I totally understand your not being in the mood to write. It happens to me al the up the lovely work!

This story is pretty good. The description is great. I notice it's been a while since you updated though. Please write more soon.