Reviews for Dragon King: The Wrath of Hrothar
castaways and cutouts chapter 9 . 3/21/2006
Sorry it took me a long time to review... I've been so bogged down lately...

Anyway, I'm looking forward to finding out more about the two new members of the group. They both seem like rather interesting people who would have very interesting backgrounds. And as for sticking with the story- my pleasure!
XLavenderX chapter 9 . 3/16/2006
very good details you have here...keep up the good work:)...
Lancun chapter 8 . 12/30/2005
Your writing never ceases to amaze me. You mix spoken words with mental thoughts on such a good level, and your attention to detail brings your characters really to life. Ever since 2004, your imagery has gotten sharper and sharper, you've quickly developed into a much better writer than I have. Keep it up, your stuff always leaves me in awe.
castaways and cutouts chapter 8 . 12/13/2005
wow, yet another amazing chapter! now I can't wait to find out who the two men are! Someone from the past possibly, from their childhood...hm **contemplates**
castaways and cutouts chapter 7 . 12/2/2005
wow. I normally don't go for fantasy stories involving dragons and the like, but yours is so good! How do you come up with all the names of people and places? I can tell some of it it Latin, but most I don't understand! Keep up the good work!
castaways and cutouts chapter 4 . 12/2/2005
I LOVE IT!
Charm Scales chapter 3 . 6/25/2005
ah this should be made into a book this is great it has the feeling and you are great author i cant wait to read this through try and submit it to a company and when it comes out i will so buy it

from the Gorillaz song All Alone: Close your eyes and seeWhen there ain't no lightAll you'll ever beCome and save the nightCoz I don't leaveWhen the morning comes it doesn'tSeem to say an awful lot to me...
Alzemu chapter 4 . 4/11/2005
Kinamori...i have to keep reminding my self about her name...(don't ask me about other names)i am so bad at remembering names!...:(
Alzemu chapter 3 . 4/5/2005
longer know, i always have a trouble pronouncing the sound of hro. h-ro-(practicing)
Alzemu chapter 2 . 4/4/2005
getting darker by the minute/chapter the main character seems to be well...let's just say quite optimistic...
Alzemu chapter 1 . 4/4/2005
hmm...nice but bit heavy i suppose but it's a good start...
Drowning In Darkness chapter 3 . 4/1/2005
It is good I enjoy. But it is weird but being a weird story does not make it a bad thing no in fact its a very good thing ;-) AIM me or Email if you want i dont care :) Rebester
Islandbreeze chapter 3 . 4/1/2005
You have a very interesting story here, really nice descriptions, beautiful imagery in some places. Good work!
Harik chapter 1 . 3/31/2005
In the second last paragraph one of the creatures says “Keep struggling or I’ll have to restrain you…” Is this a mistake? Other then that it's a good first chapter. Please try and update soon.
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