Reviews for Death & Rebirth |
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![]() ![]() ![]() dystopia sort of thing... awesome : Again WRITE SONGS WRITE SONGS |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very well stated, although I felt it lacked a poetic meter. It didn't seem to read smoothly when spoken out loud. 'Drowing in flames', that's almost an oxymoron. So beautiful. |
![]() ![]() ![]() sounds like it should be a sci-fi movie |
![]() ![]() ![]() Im totally into the whole 'balance' sorta thing, kinda jumps out to me in this. Good work, i enjoyed reading that. Keep it up, Colin. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Intriguing, kept my interest, which is a very good thing, I found this to be very good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes I believe that the Earth will be reborn once it dies. Good work. This is something to be proud of. |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting way to put things..last line not sure it totally fits but overall very well done |
![]() ![]() ![]() lovely, the imagery is amazing and the whole thing is breath taking. awe inspiring. beautiful poem, one that really grabs one's attention and leaves them in a semi-trance. !~* noelle *~! |
![]() ![]() ![]() lovely, good imagery and just awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() An excellent portrayal of life and death. I particularly like the emphasis on the Beast of Death with the irregularity in the pattern you created with the Beasts beforehand. This gives me a sense of survival, that humanity endures all this, or that it is our fault. It nicely depicts nature's endless struggles and cycles. |
![]() ![]() ![]() really nicely worded. this is an interesting poem; i like this one too! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this poem, i love the imagery, this is very good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow! great description and imagery. i loved how you capitalized 'beast' and the other world like 'ice and death'. it gives it like...its own person. like its really important. ...i cannot say what i mean |
![]() ![]() ![]() Isn't it strange how the cycles of nature are a pedulum between fire and Ice. How as our species survived so long? |