dystopia sort of thing... awesome : Again WRITE SONGS WRITE SONGS

Very well stated, although I felt it lacked a poetic meter. It didn't seem to read smoothly when spoken out loud.

'Drowing in flames', that's almost an oxymoron. So beautiful.

sounds like it should be a sci-fi movie

Im totally into the whole 'balance' sorta thing, kinda jumps out to me in this. Good work, i enjoyed reading that. Keep it up, Colin.

Intriguing, kept my interest, which is a very good thing, I found this to be very good.

nice.

Yes I believe that the Earth will be reborn once it dies. Good work. This is something to be proud of.

interesting way to put things..last line not sure it totally fits but overall very well done

lovely, the imagery is amazing and the whole thing is breath taking. awe inspiring. beautiful poem, one that really grabs one's attention and leaves them in a semi-trance.

!* noelle *!

lovely, good imagery and just awesome!

An excellent portrayal of life and death. I particularly like the emphasis on the Beast of Death with the irregularity in the pattern you created with the Beasts beforehand.

This gives me a sense of survival, that humanity endures all this, or that it is our fault. It nicely depicts nature's endless struggles and cycles.

really nicely worded. this is an interesting poem; i like this one too!

I love this poem, i love the imagery, this is very good.

wow! great description and imagery. i loved how you capitalized 'beast' and the other world like 'ice and death'. it gives it like...its own person. like its really important. ...i cannot say what i mean

Isn't it strange how the cycles of nature are a pedulum between fire and Ice. How as our species survived so long?