Reviews for Broken
Morbid Maxwell chapter 1 . 4/4/2005
You did a great job on this and as far as the cutting goes...that makes you a much greater person than I'll ever be.

Morbid Maxwell-It's a Beyblade orgy!
Ethereal Kisses chapter 1 . 4/4/2005
Heya, thanks very much for the review you left me.

I love the whole poem its very deep and very meaningful. The last line made me laugh, very ironic, and linked to the line "She's a hostage to society". I also loved the line "Her demon calls for frequent favours" - nice alliteration and the darknes angst gave me shivers. Great poem.

Ethereal Kisses
AllyCred chapter 1 . 4/1/2005
i really like this...i can see myself a lot in this...very well written and just beautifully done...and congrats for quitting for so long, i can't wait until i have the strenght to do that...again great poem...i love it. lots of love AllyCred
blackoutroses chapter 1 . 4/1/2005
deep and haunting- the images you create are amazing!
breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 3/31/2005
I liked the last couple of lines...catchy...and the rest of the poem was interesting too...