Reviews for Forgotten Bones
Out-Of-Reality chapter 1 . 4/9/2005
It had a morbidly calming feel to it. It was almost like I was reading the call of the wild again. The last line was a really good ending. Very nicely done
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 4/5/2005
creepy, but cool descriptions
RemyxZer0 chapter 1 . 4/5/2005
The full ignorance of death is refreshing. It seems as though you are just trying to make your reader look at the fact that THEY WERE ONCE ALIVE! Wonderful.
Mad Frog Rasputin chapter 1 . 4/4/2005
This is cool
Biene chapter 1 . 4/3/2005 the description. What inspired you to write this?
XxParalaixX chapter 1 . 4/1/2005
It's really kool.
DathomiranSciFiAuthor chapter 1 . 4/1/2005
Beautiful, beautiful description and imagery.
Selah Ex Animo chapter 1 . 4/1/2005
Ah, what do you mean it's not that good? 'Tis excellent! I loved reading it. Every line was beautiful, and the imagery so evocative. I really liked:

"Dead faces that still flicker with emotion,

Standing against time’s corrosion

Outstretched arms of death and gentleness,

Lonely bones that never rest."

Beautiful poem. Kudos!

- Selah
THROUGHTHESEEYES chapter 1 . 4/1/2005
very etheric. Loved it. The descriptions put me right there in the museum.